Dear Roni,
Hi..???How are you…???I hope you always fine!!!!!. Last holiday, I and my family went to my sister's house in Surabaya. We went to Surabaya by car. We departed from my house at 06.00 a.m. During the travelling I saw beautiful scenery. We arrived there at 18.00 p.m.
A few day later, my brother and I went to the zoo in Surabaya. we went to the zoo with by taxi. The zoo was very crowded. There were, after buying the tickets, we went to saw the animals at the zoo.
First, I saw a lot of pelican birds. They are very hungry, so fed the birds. Then I saw a deer eat a lot of hay. in the same enclosure I saw an ostrich. It is very large. can not fly but can run very fast. her stomach is very large as well. Before we left, we bought some drinks and food. we retired to the restroom. I am very happy in this holiday.
That's all please reply my letter!!!!
Your Friend
Yosy Putra K
That's all please reply my letter!!!!
Your Friend
Yosy Putra K
1 komentar:
You get 85. Some corrections for you :
-We depart -> we departed
-There are many traders-> there were
-The zookeeper feed the birds-> fed the birds
They must be in the past form,remember?!?!
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